What do you think of this poem? Rating of 1-10?

I think it's awesome. 8 or so. I'm not a poetry person either. I would check your grammar and spelling as well as vocab. You have a good one but keep in mind the feel of your poem and the tone you're trying to express. "Slobbering" to me sticks out like a sore thumb as something that breaks the tone continuity of the poem. Use your wide vocabulary wisely, and choose words that maintain the feel of your work. Otherwise I love it.